Monday, April 11, 2011

Dead Friendship


Standing in front of a silent grave
Asking my soul to be brave
The name on it read- to friendship
My heart it seems to make a skip
I feel so aloof
Wishing to disapprove
Come back hold me once
Make the move, cover the expanse
Frustration, misery, agony and hurt
Is there anything more to assert?
Covered in my bloodstained soul
I seemed to have lost all control
Our friendship, it took a final breath
It was me who had a silent death
Alive yet dead,
I walk alone
Hollow and strained
To a place unknown

2 comments:

  1. Umm.. to be honest, I didn't get the character's thoughts.. You could have sketched their friendship further, as if what it was that led her to these feelings..

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  2. Good one... Loved the last four lines...

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